The qualities a person needs to become truly successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The question of whether or not a
university
or similar schools such
as technical institutions could provide the relevant qualities needed for true success
in present day life is often debatable. In my own view, both institutions aid success
by equipping students with the required skills and the needed qualities.
To begin
with, the university
is a carefully designed institution that creates an enabling environment, where students could receive knowledge, trainings as well as sound character building. All these translate as a matter of fact into making them better poised for success
in life. Based on my knowledge, I can safely concluded
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in their different endeavours. An online study I came across recently also
buttresses this
point after concluding that a person's success
is directly related to his or her level of education.
Another compelling reason I believe that similar institutions such
as a Technical university
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success
is that, many of the these schools have recently been able to incorporate entrepreneurship into their curriculum. This
compulsory aspect of learning in such
schools ensures that the graduates learn a lot about how to create businesses and run it profitably independent of government. As an example, the oldest technical university
located in my home town is reputed for churning out graduates who do not depend on the government for employment, but are
rather employers of labour themselves, owing to the crucial entrepreneurial qualities inculcated into them, Suggestion
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has, in no small measure, facilitated their success
in my opinion.
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also
gain knowledge on how to become employers of labour. Therefore
, it is imperative that government at all levels should support these schools.Submitted by fbjatom50 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite