The qualities a person needs to become truly successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The question of whether or not a
university
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or similar schools
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as technical institutions could provide the relevant qualities needed for true
success
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in present day life is often debatable. In my own view, both institutions aid
success
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by equipping students with the required skills and the needed qualities.
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with, the
university
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is a carefully designed institution that creates an enabling environment, where students could receive knowledge, trainings as well as sound character building. All these translate as a matter of fact into making them better poised for
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in life. Based on my knowledge, I can safely
concluded
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conclude
that
most successful individuals
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the most successful individuals
in my country, Nigeria,
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example are
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people who attended one institution of higher learning or the other, where they are able to garner skills and qualities required to clinch
success
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in their different endeavours. An online study I came across recently
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buttresses
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point after concluding that a person's
success
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is directly related to his or her level of education. Another compelling reason I believe that similar institutions
such
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as a Technical
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university
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university, for
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example might
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be able to position one for
success
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is that, many of the these schools have recently been able to incorporate entrepreneurship into their curriculum.
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compulsory aspect of learning in
such
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schools ensures that the graduates learn a lot about how to create businesses and run it profitably independent of government. As an example, the oldest technical
university
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located in my home town is reputed for churning out graduates who do not depend on the government for employment, but
are
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is
rather employers of labour themselves, owing to the crucial entrepreneurial qualities inculcated into them,
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while at
the school.
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has, in no small measure, facilitated their
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in my opinion. In conclusion
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,
I would state that
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the citadels
of higher education are vitally important in positioning graduates for a successful life, in my view, especially when they
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gain knowledge on how to become employers of labour.
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, it is imperative that government at all levels should support these schools.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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