Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Following fashion nowadays has become the important part of the life. It has gained lots of popularity. Some people think that the main purpose of the trend is to make
profit
Suggestion
a profit
, while others argue that men and women should wear clothes in which they feel comfortable. I totally agree with
this
statement.
First
of all, following fashion trend is very difficult because it changes very
fastly
with rapid movements
quickly
.
Also it
Accept comma addition
Also, it
is
waste
Suggestion
a waste
of money. Branded clothes are very expensive not everyone can afford them.
Secondly
, people
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
their identity, they imitate to their admired celebrities.
Thirdly
, they
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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