In many countries, women and men are working full time, therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many females and males spend most of their

time

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work

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and barely have

time

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for homely responsibilities. Some people hold that there should be a sort of division of household

task

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bewteen

internal to, involving members of (a group of people)

between

each

gender but

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gender, but

I partly agree to

this

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statement with the following reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. To create a level of stability in the

home

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, either the man or woman needs to take up a part

time

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work

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rather than engaging in full

time

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work

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, in order to meet up with the everyday need.

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, in Nigeria, most women choose jobs that

allows

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allow

a flexible working hour

such

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as teaching, which they

work

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between a particular

time

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frame and

also

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attend to other crucial homely

task

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to ensure a stable environment. Futhermore the quest to make more money in the

home

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, has made many people partake in full

time

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work

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, thereby employing a number of staff to assist in these household responsibilities. To illustrate, in many developed countries, people employ Nannies, cooks, gardeners and cleaners

to help

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help

in taking care of the

home

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while they engage in full

time

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work

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, many professions are too demanding and require ample

time

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and attention which makes it almost impossible for the man or woman to meet up with

household

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household tasks

a household task

task

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. To clarify, a medical doctor or legal practitioner might have a very busy day at

work

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and may require to continue working or studying at

home

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in preparation for activities the following day and might not have enough

time

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to help with homely

task

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, other means of getting these responsibilities done would be of help other than

spliting

resembling a sound of violent tearing as of something ripped apart or lightning splitting a tree

splitting

it amongst men or women. In conclusion, for things to

work

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perfectly in a

home

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, individuals should do whatever works for them by

spliting

resembling a sound of violent tearing as of something ripped apart or lightning splitting a tree

splitting

responsibilities

amongs

in division, with shares to each

amongst

among

themselves or by employing staff to help with

these

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this task

these tasks

task

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finally

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, by adopting the method of one person doing a part

time

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job.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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326 words

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Gender equality
Division of labor
Household chores
Work-life balance
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Gender roles
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