In many countries, women and men are working full time, therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many females and males spend most of their
time
at
work
and barely have
time
for homely responsibilities. Some people hold that there should be a sort of division of household
task
bewteen
internal to, involving members of (a group of people)
between
each
gender but
Accept comma addition
gender, but
I partly agree to
this
statement with the following reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. To create a level of stability in the
home
, either the man or woman needs to take up a part
time
work
rather than engaging in full
time
work
, in order to meet up with the everyday need.
For instance
, in Nigeria, most women choose jobs that
allows
Suggestion
allow
a flexible working hour
such
as teaching, which they
work
between a particular
time
frame and
also
attend to other crucial homely
task
to ensure a stable environment. Futhermore the quest to make more money in the
home
, has made many people partake in full
time
work
, thereby employing a number of staff to assist in these household responsibilities. To illustrate, in many developed countries, people employ Nannies, cooks, gardeners and cleaners
to help
Suggestion
help
in taking care of the
home
while they engage in full
time
work
.
Finally
, many professions are too demanding and require ample
time
and attention which makes it almost impossible for the man or woman to meet up with
household
Suggestion
household tasks
a household task
task
. To clarify, a medical doctor or legal practitioner might have a very busy day at
work
and may require to continue working or studying at
home
in preparation for activities the following day and might not have enough
time
to help with homely
task
.
Therefore
, other means of getting these responsibilities done would be of help other than
spliting
resembling a sound of violent tearing as of something ripped apart or lightning splitting a tree
splitting
it amongst men or women. In conclusion, for things to
work
perfectly in a
home
, individuals should do whatever works for them by
spliting
resembling a sound of violent tearing as of something ripped apart or lightning splitting a tree
splitting
responsibilities
amongs
in division, with shares to each
amongst
among
themselves or by employing staff to help with
these
Suggestion
this task
these tasks
task
or
finally
, by adopting the method of one person doing a part
time
job.
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