Some people believe that the Olympics Games do not have a role in the 21st Century. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The Olympic games have played its vital role in its own way in recent times, even in today's century where the problems between two countries has increased the Olympic games makes the several countries to come at one place and play for the
country
. In
this
global era, where the technology and usage of gadget has increased up to an extreme level so,
firstly
it helps us to gather our family members to go out and watch the sports and spend time with each other as because people nowadays do not have any time to sit and talk with each other as they are mainly busy in their own work because of their tight schedule.
Secondly
, due to Olympic games the communication between the countries increases, which leads to less intake of war. While watching
sports children
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sports, children
can
increases
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increase
their knowledge about the new sports, about the equipments used in that sport and
also
be able to find new things about the player's playing and their countries.
Likewise
, it benefits most to the
country
in which the
olympic
of or relating to the Olympic Games
Olympic
games
is being played
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are being played
after every four years.It helps to increase the financial status of the economy
country
.Since, it helps
host
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the host country's economy
host country's economy
country
economy by tourism of players and tourists. In
counclusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
consolation
, I tend to believe that,
olympic
of or relating to the Olympic Games
Olympic
games can provide all the things which
can not
can not
cannot
be seen neither in any gadget nor through technology and
also
olympic
of or relating to the Olympic Games
Olympic
is a perfect place to interact socially with people from their hectic schedules, as a
resultno
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result no
body can say no to
such
facinating
capable of arousing and holding the attention
fascinating
games.
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