Reading for pleasure can develop imagination and language skills better than watching TV. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that, delighted reading improves the people's creativity and their

language

skills rather than watching television.

This

essay disagrees with

this

statement.

Firstly

this

essay will discuss the fact that watching

can develop imagination,

secondly it

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secondly, it

will talk about how watching

can

teaches

Suggestion

teach

language

skills.

To begin

with, watching

is helpful in developing creativity because it allows the viewers to know what they are talking about. On

they can enjoy audio and video.

For instance

Accept space

if a child is watching a tourism channel, they are exposed to

wide range

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a wide range

of knowledge

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images of different places.

Moreover

, there are

alot

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a lot

of educational programmes in which audience

have

Suggestion

has

to think, in

this

way they can improve their con improve their creativity.

In contrast

, not everyone can read the book. There are few uneducated people so for them it becomes difficult to read.

Nevertheless

, complex vocabulary and sentence

make

Suggestion

makes

for readers hard to understand and to think. Another factor to consider is that it enhances

language

skills because from

television

Suggestion

the television

we learn the way of communicating with others.

In other words

, we

listen

perceive (sound) via the auditory sense

hear

the dialogue from

programmes and we start to learn them. It is like a practical learning.

Furthermore

, it is

benifical

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

for children because they spend a large amount of time on it.

However

, reading is boring for children

also

for adults because it takes

alot

Suggestion

a lot

of time. To illustrate, a recent research by Oxford University found that people learn

language

skills through television

esaily

with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')

easily

rather than books. In conclusion, after having discussed pertinent points, I believe that

teaches us

language

skills and to be created easily rather than reading books.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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12Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

279 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Reading for pleasure can develop imagination and language skills better than watching TV. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid job and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. What extent do you agree?

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