Advertisements are influencing us in a negative way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Avertising
Suggestion
Advertising
is
atool
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a tool
which is used by organizations to promote their products in the market, and now it becomes a part of our
lives
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life
. Some people believe that it
majorly create
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majorly creates
a negative impact and other side some think it helps us to identify the best
product
Use synonyms
.
Avertisements
Suggestion
Advertisements
has played
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have played
a major role in today's growing world of buying and selling.
Also
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has created negative aspects. Like,
firstly
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most of the
commericals
connected with or engaged in or sponsored by or used in commerce or commercial enterprises
commercials
are being made to just sell the
product
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as they always give wrong information about the
product
Use synonyms
.
For example
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, as the thumb up soft drink shows that how a person can easily jump
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
the helicopter without any fear after drinking it.
Secondly
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, they have manipulated the customers to buy the
product
Use synonyms
any how.
Such
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as people are now updating the
iphone
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iPhone
by seeing the
chatcy
lacking a visible order or organization
chaotic
features of the phone.
Lastly
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, many people just buy the products without even knowing about the
quailty
an essential and distinguishing attribute of something or someone
quality
city
quilt
, price or usage because they just buy because his/her
favriote
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
actor has promoted the
product
Use synonyms
. Sometimes, due to all
this
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major reasons the people
creates
Suggestion
create
uncessary need
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an unnecessary need
unnecessary need
the unnecessary need
necessary need
to purchase the
product
Use synonyms
even if they require or not.
For instance
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, it
create
Suggestion
creates
a mindset of housewives that having a vegetable chopper helps them to reduce cooking time.Though
,
Accept space
,
there is no much time difference in cutting vegetable using chopper and
knife
Suggestion
a knife
. To sum up, following reasons creates a negative impact.
Beacuse
Suggestion
Because
they convince people to buy
uncessary
not necessary
unnecessary
things, low-quality products and
mis lead
lead someone in the wrong direction or give someone wrong directions
mislead
providing the wrong information about the products.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Intrusive
  • Omnipresent
  • Culture of consumerism
  • Materialism
  • Unrealistic standards
  • Self-esteem
  • Targeting strategies
  • Privacy invasion
  • Psychological manipulation
  • Overexposure
  • Decision fatigue
  • Conscious
  • Informed choices
  • Biased
  • Mislead
  • Critical sectors
  • Repetition
  • Environmental degradation
  • Throwaway culture
  • Non-durable goods
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