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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important

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In the era, where people are more attractive towards materialistic living and believe to increase social status and position in the society. Without even bothering about their customs and traditions. It is believed that we are living in
pop culture
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a pop culture
 where people are just
concern
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concerned
 about their standard of living
,
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,
social status and valued based on their wealth. As we know many
clebrities
a widely known person
celebrities
 are just being
love
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loved
 because of their wealth
,
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,
fame
,
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,
big mansions
,
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,
extra ordinary style of living rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 their work or talent. People nowadays just wanted to make more friends they just want attention from them. People will
never think even
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never even think
 once before making
friends which
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friends, which
 give them fame and attention. They have somewhere
misslead
not caught with the senses or the mind
missed
mislead
 the qualities of
true friend
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a true friend
 like loyalty
,
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,
supportive and honest. All they need it a group of persons who praise them. On the
filp
lightly throw to see which side comes up
flip
flop
 side, though the values have
be
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been
 neglected some way around on the other side many
coummunity
a group of people living in a particular local area
communities
 still possess the true values, their customs and tradition
upto
 an extent.
Still in
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Still, in
 many schools values and culture subjects has been taught to the students.
Also
, many big
organisation
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organisations
 want to hire
a
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an
 honest, hardworking and loyal employee and
also
 they always try to find a kind and
trustworthly
worthy of trust or belief
trustworthy
 partner to run the business.
Therefore
, it is important for adults to educate their children about these positive values because they still play an essential part in the
socities
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
societies
. In conclusion, even though people are judged based on their wealth and social status nowadays, but I do believe that old fashioned values
such
 as honour, respect and trust cannot be eliminated from our daily lives.
Therefore we
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Therefore, we
 must teach our young generation about these cultures, in order for them to survive and succeed in the future.
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