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Some people think that companies should provide employees with exercise time during the day. What is your opinion?

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It is true that companies have a considerate responsibility for their employees´ health.
However
, I completely disagree with the idea that they should
therefore
 set up a
time
 for
exercise
at
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in
 the workplace. In my opinion, forcing all the companies to provide
exercise
time
 during a day is thoroughly impractical. For certain occupations which especially involve punctuality or avoid distracting elements, stopping the staff to do
exercise
 by some means becomes annoying.
For instance
, it seems ludicrous
for
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to
 me when doctors have to do stop their work to
exercise whereas
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exercise, whereas
 there is an emergency that requires immediate actions.
Besides
, even
employees
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the employees
 could be forced to do
exercise
, I doubt that people would fully understand the need for that activity.
On the contrary
, they might feel obligated and
thus
 increase their unwillingness and reluctance toward the companies. As well as being impractical, I would argue that
exercise
 in the workplace is unnecessary.
Personally I
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Personally, I
 believe that companies should
instead
 improve the quality of the meals served to the staff. Seeing that nutrition plays a key role in enhancing health; yet it is much easier to implement with a profound impact. If people can eat healthily and mindfully what they enjoy, it can not only protect them from illnesses like food poisoning, stomachache, but
also
 improve their mood and boost their productivity.
In addition
, companies can encourage their staff to do physical activities by certain promotions
such
 as buying them memberships of a gym.
For example
, Baker&McKensy has a healthcare policy to ensure their workers´ well-being.
That is
 signing them up in a health club and allowing them to leave earlier than other law firms do so that they can have more free
time
 for
exercise
. In conclusion, while compulsory
time
 to do
exercise
 in the office seems like a good idea, I believe that
such
 a scheme would be unworkable and largely pointless.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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