Some people think the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles in order to solve environment problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increased
use
of
fuel
and its role global warming and the
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
phenomenon has long been proven. Recently, more and more people have advocated toward increasing costs of
fuel
in an
attemt
make an effort or attempt
attempt
to solve
this
critical problem.
Although
it is a
wondeful
extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier
wonderful
if we are interested in protecting our planet, I do not fully agree it will solve
this
problem. By increasing the financial burden on cars that utilize
fuel
, other less hazardous ways of transportation become more cost effective and may convince people to
use
them.
For example
, When driving to work with a private car will cost 20% more than using the
electrical
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electric
train, more and more people will
use
it.
This
has been shown repeatedly in many countries
such
as
Canda
a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada
Canada
, Israel and France.
Also
, a recent publication from the Jerusalem University has shown that when
fuel
prices increase, car pooling become much more common in
comparisson
the act of examining resemblances
comparison
to other countries leading to reduced pollution and protecting our environment.
Although
I truly believe
fuel
prices should be raised in order to save our planet, I do not think it will solve the problem
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
other parameters need be addressed at the same time in order to reach our goal. As an example, as long as public transportation is not accessible, people will not
use
it. In Germany,
for example
, despite the high gas prices people are still not using the trains because their stations are located 20 minutes walk from the residential areas. If train stations will become accessible more people will
use
it on their way to work. In conclusion, I believe
that that increasing the
Suggestion
that increasing the
costs of
gasolin
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gasoline
may lead to reduced usage of
cars
Accept comma addition
cars, however
however
, in order to achieve the required change other
paramaters
a constant in the equation of a curve that can be varied to yield a family of similar curves
parameters
should be
also
addressed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental problems
  • increase the cost of fuel
  • cars and other vehicles
  • solve
  • to what extent
  • agree or disagree
  • discourage
  • lead to
  • reduction
  • carbon emissions
  • encourage
  • public transportation
  • traffic congestion
  • additional revenue
  • eco-friendly
  • technologies
  • infrastructure
  • disproportionately
  • low-income individuals
  • alternative solutions
  • electric vehicles
  • renewable energy
  • considered
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • importance
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