In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

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In the past, even a

high-school

a public secondary school usually including grades 9 through 12

highschool

pass out was considered capable

for

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job

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. Nowadays, highly qualified graduates are struggling to get a decent

job

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. They migrate to developed

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countries in

search of jobs, but these countries are

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facing the same issue. Economic

resession

the state of the economy declines; a widespread decline in the GDP and employment and trade lasting from six months to a year

recession

recessions

, unequal salaries and lack of

job

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positions are the three main reasons for

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situation.

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, if the

country

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's economy is not stable enough, it cannot provide a safe and secure employment.

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a situation

situations

the situation

of crisis, the government companies and private companies may stop hiring and lay off their

employess

a worker who is hired to perform a job

employees

. The employees will need to migrate to developed countries in search for jobs.

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, it causes scarcity of jobs for these professionals.

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, the workers are not paid up to their

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potential, but rather

considered as freshers. There is

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a huge pay difference between the developed

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's professional and a developing

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's professional.

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, monetary benefits act as a huge factor in

employment rate

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the employment rate

employment rates

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, the

country

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lacks skilled

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positions. When a graduate starts searching for

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job

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a job

, he

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asks

for experience. If he is a fresher in the work environment,

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he is asked to perform tasks lower than his potential despite a qualified degree.

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, all these problems come with the solutions. Government bodies must fund small entrepreneurs to start up their business, internships should be provided to freshers to test their potential, doctors must start their own practise, fringe benefits like health insurance and security must be presented to employees.

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, I believe that if new businesses grow, they can add a lot of

job

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oppurtunities

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

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, like in the IT sector

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, starting

small but meeting

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the small but meeting

a small but meeting

the employees

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need

not only benefits the

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country but

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country, but

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ensures that highly qualified graduates

dont

do not

don't

stay unemployed.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In many parts of the world, women study science and technology, but donot work in these fields. What measures can be taken to encourage women to work in science and technology?

Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

A government's role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community.

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to imporse a higher tax on this kind of food. TO what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?