You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1)Explain why you are selling the television. 2)Describe the television. 3)Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Ruth, How're you darling? I hope everything is well with you. By the way,I intend

putting

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up my TV set for sale and I thought I should inform you if you will want to

buy

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itbuy

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. My husband just got promoted in his company to the position of

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Director and has been transferred to their headquarter in Dubai.

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, my family will be relocating in two weeks time so, we are selling off most of our belongings.I remembered you planned

buying

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a secondhand TV set for your living room

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week. I don't know if you would like ours. We've used the TV for only a year now and hasn't developed any fault. It's a 52inches Samsung,

flat screen

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with an inbuilt stabilizer to regulate current. Since you are always less busy on weekends, you could come over to my place

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saturday

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Saturday

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and see if you would love to buy it. Hope to see you soon. Best Wishes Glory

GloryTue Jul 23 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1)Explain why you are selling the television. 2)Describe the television. 3)Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it. Write at least 150 words.

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the plans show how a coastal land has developed into coastal park

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