Punishing murderers with death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder.therefore life in prisonmement is a better punishment for murder.to what extent do you agreee

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Over the years
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murderers are sentenced to death
as a result
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of capital offence committed.
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this
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act cannot change them and can affect the Society negatively.
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context I
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context, I
shall strongly go against
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Firstly
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,
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murderer sometimes
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murderer, sometimes
do not have insight to what they do at the moment they are
commuting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
the offence
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might
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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
due to the fact that they are under drugs or acting on the effect of alcohol. When all these wears off from them
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when they come to realise the
offenses
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offences
offence
they have committed.
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, committing them to murder can make a country to lose people who can develop the country later in life.As all human has their own good sides.
keeping
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Keeping
them in prison and developing their potential abilities will go a.
long
primarily temporal sense; being or indicating a relatively great or greater than average duration or passage of time or a duration as specified
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way in developing the country as taking their life's earlier will not change them to a better person
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, they society will
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b
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
affected negatively as the children of the murdered convict will not have a proper upbringing,
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posing as another threat to the society they live in.
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subsequently they
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Subsequently, they
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might
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follow the trend of their parents.
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can tremendously increase the crime rate in the society. In conclusion
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I am of the strong opinion that murderers can actually contribute to the economic development from.
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the need for the government to reduce
death punishment
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the death punishment
to a lesser one
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Capital punishment
  • Life imprisonment
  • Moral implications
  • Deterrence
  • Rehabilitation
  • Retribution
  • Irreversible
  • Hypocrisy
  • Cost-effective
  • State-sanctioned
  • Conviction
  • Redemption
  • Closure
  • Victim’s family
  • Ethical dilemma
  • Punitive measures
  • Legal process
  • Execution
  • Incarceration
  • Appeals process
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