An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. Advantages and disadvantage for both individual and companies to shopping online

In the
modern sophisticated
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modern, sophisticated
world buy item's from
internet
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the internet
is much popular. Online shopping
have
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has
positive and negative
approch
move towards
approach
approaches
from
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of
the people.
This
essay
discusess
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discusses
discuss
discuses
the pros and cons of online shopping for buyers and sellers Some of the advantages of online shopping are it reduce time. For an instance, in
this
current era people have busy with their life they have limited time for their daily routine
at
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in
that situation online shopping is a superb solution for buying items.
Moreover
, most of the online service have
home delivery system
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a home delivery system
.
Therefore with in
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Therefore, within
Therefore within
a limited period of time
coustomer
someone who pays for goods or services
customers
got the ordered items.
Also
, no need of cash in hand. All payments are by debit, credit card or online banking.
In addition
, the online company has no need of mid-
man
the time period between dawn and noon
morn
. The
dealing
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deal
is with customers and owners only
On the other hand
, online shopping
have
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has
some negative phase. Because it is a way of cheating. According to a survey conducted by a
newspaper 30
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newspaper, 30
% of online companies are fake. They
advertising
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advertise
are advertising
are advertised
their product in
internet
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the internet
but, it was a really fake news. If the customers pay for
it they
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it, they
are cheated at the meanwhile.
In addition
plethora of online products are
duplicate
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duplicated
and the customers
donot
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do not
get a valid
warrenty
a written assurance that some product or service will be provided or will meet certain specifications
warranty
warrant
or
garanty
a collateral agreement to answer for the debt of another in case that person defaults
guaranty
guarantee
guaranteed
cards.
Furthermore
, some online cheaters hake customers bank
detalis
true confidential information
details
and they
thieft
make a shift in or exchange of
shift
customers
valubile
having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange
valuable
money.
For instance
,
few weaks
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a few weeks
few weeks
agi
in the past
ago
age
some online cases
are registered
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were registered
in a metropolitan city. Some customers are
also
cheated the online
companys
an institution created to conduct business
companies
company
. Few of the online booking
have
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has
delivery
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delivered
after cash system. If the customer booked for a particular item and give a fake home address for the delivery In conclusion, in a safe manner online shopping is a good type of shopping. Customers are select good companies for their shopping. Aware and
donot
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do not
fall
in
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into
a trap
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