Some people think that a high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that a good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
So many people, especially fresh graduates, are confused when deciding their career projections and choosing a
company
to work
for. Some people think the amount of salary
provided by the company
should become a first
consideration while others argue that a convenient working atmosphere should be prioritised. In this
essay, I shall provide both point
of views and give my personal opinion.
Suggestion
points
To begin
with, companies that offer a high salary
usually require candidates who can take higher level
of responsibilities. It is suitable for ambitious people who look for Suggestion
a higher level
higher levels
work
challenges or people who have higher standard
of living. Suggestion
a higher standard
For example
, someone who has a hobby to collect luxury items. However
, workers have to know that in so many cases, there are some unavoidable conditions in this
working environment
. For instance
, toxic and bad-tempered boss, tight schedule, work
deadlines, work
-related stress, and sleep deprivation. If this
condition will not bother our happiness, we can join this
rate
race.
any of various long-tailed rodents similar to but larger than a mouse
rat
However
, If I have to choose, I personally prefer working in a company
with a good working atmosphere. I think if it is only about how much money people can gain, they can do side hustle
after office hours. Nowadays, everybody can easily build online stores to get additional income. Working in a convenient Suggestion
a side hustle
environment
is beneficial, for example
, employers feel more comfortable which allows them to be more creative. It is suitable for people who enjoy working in
a slow pace, having an intimate relationship with co-workers, working in creative sectors, Suggestion
at
furthermore
it is also
better for our self-development.
In conclusion, choosing a company
that offers a high salary
or have a good work
environment
is absolutely a personal preference. However
, I believe that people can still get high income while choosing a company
with convenient
Suggestion
the convenient work environment
a convenient work environment
work
environment
by doing side business, so that they do not have to sacrifice their happiness in order to get higher
Suggestion
a higher salary
higher salaries
salary
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