Many people today use their phones for sending texts more than talking. What are the reasons for this? are there more advantages than disadvatages ?

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The cellular
phone
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has introduced many changes into our lives. It allows us to be constantly available, it gives us the ability to take pictures and sent them to other friends and it
also
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permitts
consent to, give permission
permits
us to have
multilpe
having or involving or consisting of more than one part or entity or individual
multiple
calls whenever we want.The most important thing we
recieved
conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers
received
however
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from the mobile
phone
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, is the ability to send short written texts to other people. These messages have revolutionized the way we communicate
ond
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
many people today use their phones primarily for sending texts. The main reason texts have become so popular lies in their simplicity. Unlike talking, we send short and simple sentences that convey exactly what we want to say.
For example
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, if I am interested in knowing where Tom is,
instead
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of dialing
he's
male possessive pronoun
his
number, waiting for him to pick up the
phone
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and
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
talk to him I can simply
right
produce a literary work
write
a short text which is much faster and less time
conssuming
very intense
consuming
.
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Further more
in addition
Furthermore
, during the years a number of written shortcuts have become increasingly popular. As an example,
instead
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of
writting
the act of creating written works
writing
"you too", we can write "U2" and
instead
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of "
lough
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Lough
out loud" we can write "LOL".
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this
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This
made the texting system even faster. Despite the above mentioned, I
beileve
accept as true; take to be true
believe
sending texts have more disadvantages than advantages.
First
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, it is less personal and much more detached. As an example, sending a "happy birthday" message is much less
warmming
the process of becoming warmer; a rising temperature
warming
than talking with a friend through the
phone
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or in person.
Second
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, the many shortcuts and phrases that have evolved
nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
with the increased use of texting have diminished our vocabulary and our language diversity.
Last
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, texting affects people's social abilities.
This
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can be seen in teenagers parties where
instead
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of talking to each other they are all concentrated on their phones and communicate through texts rather than formal conversations. In conclusion, texts have changed our lives completely and become a common form of communication. Despite that, I believe it has many disadvantages and should not replace the formal way of communications. We should talk to our
friend
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friends
and not write to them.
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