Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people believe that it is significant using spare

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for things that enhance the

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, reading and doing word puzzles. The others think that it is vital to relax the

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during spare

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. In my opinion, I agree that people should use

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for activities which improve the

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one hand, some people have very exhausting jobs.

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, they would like to relax during

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, so they do not want to do anything within

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. They think they need to rest.

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, many people are lazy, for

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reason, they do not keen to do activities to improve the

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instance reading

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instance, reading

a book and doing sudoku puzzles.

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, many people have stressful jobs too, but they like to enhance the

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, they do many things within

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as reading a novel, solving puzzles, doing exercises which are useful for improving the

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. I think that people who utilise spare

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doing activities that boost the

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are more successful than others who love to use spare

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for relaxing.

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, in my opinion, people should use their

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to improve the

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reason, people should do anything which is useful for enhancing the

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, ı would argue that people should be

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working hard not to

be idle. So they always do something to be more successful.

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, I think some activities are so relaxing while they improve the

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as doing sudoku puzzles. In conclusion, ı agree that people should do activities that improve the

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during

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, while that they are performing activities for improving the

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, the activities can contribute to job achievement.

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, I think,

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time

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should be used effectively since it is so precious.