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Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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It is argued that
,
Accept space
,
to achieve the
success
 we should take risks
,
Accept space
,
while others think that careful planning is
good step
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a good step
 to get
success
.
This
 essay agrees with
this
 statement
,
Accept space
,
firstly
, it will
dicuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
 the fact that how careful planning is
best
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the best way
way
 to be successful and
secondly
, it will show what factors can be done to achieve
success
 in life.
To begin
 with
,
Accept space
,
a good plan can lead us to
success
 because
firstly
,
Accept space
,
with a plan, we make lists of the goals that we want to accomplish.
In other words
,
Accept space
,
we know clearly what we have to do and how we can get what we want easily.
For instance
,
Accept space
,
a
students
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student
 makes their
studypaln
 to get good grades in the school, which is
very helpful method
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a very helpful method
. .
However
, taking risks is not a good because we never know what can happen.To put it another
way
, risks are dangerous step, it all
depens
be contingent upon (something that is elided)
depends
depend
 on the luck and they do not have
surity
the state of being sober and not intoxicated by alcohol
sobriety
, while plans have less risk of failure. Another factor to consider is that, when people organise the
success
 plan, they get to know how much time they need and
finiancial
involving financial matters
financial
financially
 requirements it has in
this
way
, they learn to become patient and know deeply what
there
of them or themselves
their
 aims are. It allows people to find an easier
way
 to reach their aim. To illustrate, a recent research carried out by Cambridge University showed that, planning is the key to
success
 because people know what they have to do and
this
 thing
lead
Suggestion
leads
 them to be more motivated rather than taking risks. In conclusion, after having discussed pertinent points, I believe that we should organise the things in
good
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the best
way
 so in the future we can easily achieve our goals.
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