News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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News editors' responsibility is to provide real information to the public no
matter there
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matter, there
are bad news or good news.
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, new editors need to consider about the new which
is affect
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affects
public safety or not.
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, many media do choose good news to
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report which
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report, which
may let the public ignore the bad news. Nowadays there are still some serious environmental problems, while many media do not tend to
report
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something bad. They would choose to
report
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some news are not that serious trying to make up the news. Or they would like to
report
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something entertaining. Reporting something
have
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has
more value allows the
coompany
an institution created to conduct business
company
companies
earn more money. If there are only judge the government scheme or
report
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something boring like about
politices
a leader engaged in civil administration
politicians
politics
, people tend to read something funny. So public interest
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influence the news selection. It would not be better if more good news reported.
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of all, more good news reported does not mean bad news
do not exist
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does not exist
. It is necessary for us to know anything happened all over the world. It is important that more good news reported not equal to more good news happened. Some country
are trying
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is trying
to control the new reported like China. In case, there was some dreadful illness in
China but
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China, but
the central government tried to hide the news, which causes the whole world could not adopt some action to protect the people's health due to the information was filtered and covered by China. To conclude, news editors need to be independent and professional when broadcasting the news. There are many factors would influence the selection of news, but being a news editor need to tell the truth to the public
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of telling a good side of a new.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Engagement
  • Relevance
  • Urgency
  • Natural disasters
  • Political upheavals
  • Public health concerns
  • Advertising revenue
  • Sponsorship deals
  • Market competition
  • Editorial policies
  • Censorship
  • Newsworthy
  • Desensitization
  • Bad news fatigue
  • Negativity bias
  • Balanced view
  • Social media
  • Viral content
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