The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

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Traditional dinning habits of a household
are soon vanishing
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soon vanish
. The reasons and implications of
such
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change will be discussed
further
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. In native families, it was a motto that “a family that eats together stays united.” In current scenarios with the growth of nuclear families
this
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motto was long replaced. In the old age traditions, joint families comprising of elders and children ate at a particular time to save electricity as well communicate about their day-to-day activities. Modern nests consist merely of the parents, and their two children. The growing need
of
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for
income pressurizes the folks of young children to spend extra hours at their workplace. Since the dawn of
Internet
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the Internet
, the frequency of eating as one unit is a rare phenomenon because every member has now the luxury to sit at the table with a mobile phone. The small electronic device has outstanding features, which is
also
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the reason for various distances created among people living under the same roof.
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, eating out is yet another reason that young adults indulge in rather than stay home for cooked
food
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. Interestingly,
food
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joints serve
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food even
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food, even
to
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in
the early hours of the morning encouraging the late night work or party
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
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, the disappearing trend to have a single meal together has created a block in communication. The dominant rise of electronics has created a drop in relations. Due to the
take-out
(bridge) a bid that asks your partner to bid another suit
takeout
food
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culture, obesity and heart attacks are rampant.
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has a serious impact on individuals in the house as
their
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they're
unable to understand the needs of each other. Often it leads to broken homes or broken human beings. To conclude, it
is thrived
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has thriven
thrives
upon to share time in the day to eat with one another.
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