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Some people think that English will be the most common language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this impact?

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It is though that English, which is now widely spoken
language
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, may predominate over other languages globally and results in their eventual disappearance.
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 impact may be beneficial in better understanding and economic growth
worldwide but
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worldwide, but
 there will be some drawbacks as well.
One
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 evident benefit of having a single
language
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 is that it could provide a mean for communication and better understanding among people of different countries.
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 would eventually help them to share their ideas, thoughts and feelings in a convenient way. Flow of information could be achieved throughout the
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.
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, speaking
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language
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 would be advantageous to promote economic development. As all the people are speaking a common
language
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, there would be less barriers and
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,
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the trade
 would flourish between countries resulting in improvement in
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world economy
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the world economy
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, there are obvious disadvantages of speaking
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language
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, it would mean that all other languages would disappear eventually, and along with them, their culture. The diversity of culture is
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 of the joy
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world
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 has to offer. Each culture
having
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has
 distinctive perspective, making it unique throughout the
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, would be lost
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were
 speaking
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language
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. Tourism would decline as there will be no charm to travel around for pleasure and adventure, that would devastate economy of those countries relying on tourism. To sum up, speaking
one
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language
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 is beneficial for better communication, but too much would be lost
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. It is better to speak different languages to preserve and promote different cultures for future generations.
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