Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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In recent times, the
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ethics of people have changed a lot.
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may be due to the increased level of competition in the
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a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
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, some people spend more
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at
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which
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hits into their personal
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for hobbies. While
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is beneficial in terms of career advancement, the demerits
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have to be considered. On the one hand, putting in extra hours at
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increase the possibility of growing in one’s field.
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is because a lot of employers, especially in developing countries like Nigeria, see
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act as a sign of commitment to the job.
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, my girlfriend who works in a commercial bank insists on closing at 5 pm as stipulated in her employment letter because she love to visit the gym every evening. When the result of her
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year performance appraisal was released, she got a very bad rating from her supervisor while her colleague, who does not leave earlier than 7 pm, got a promotion.
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, working overtime provides the opportunity to earn more money, especially for people that get paid per hour.
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makes it possible to save up and finance special projects they could, hitherto, not afford.
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, sacrificing
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meant for spare
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activities has its disadvantages. Leisure activities give employees a chance to unwind from all
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related stress.
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is not only beneficial to employees, because they are healthier, but
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to the benefit of the employers as staff are able to put in their best during
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hours. An overwhelming number of studies show that workers who
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a maximum of 40 hours every week are significantly more productive than those who
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overtime.
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is why some structured organizations make it compulsory, by turning off all internet facilities, to leave the office as required by their policy. In conclusion,
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working overtime at the expenses of their spare
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earns people more money and possible recognition at
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, it reduces their over efficiency. In my opinion, a
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-life balance is essential for everybody’s wellbeing, and overworking should
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be discouraged by all means. Employers, maybe as a sign of commitment to employee welfare, should even consider sponsoring hobbies of their staff.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work-life balance
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • stress relief
  • productivity
  • economic growth
  • career progression
  • skill enhancement
  • quality time
  • financial security
  • leisure activities
  • physical health
  • personal relationships
  • stress-related illnesses
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