Do children behave better when they are physical punished or rewarded. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is quite evident that nowadays the parents worry about their children regarding the physical

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various rewards, which can improve the

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of children. So, both the aspects of improvement will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs, before commenting on my opinion. On the one hand, there are

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having several reasons behind giving physical

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, by which the

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of children would be improved.

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, pupils remember the physical

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easily as compared to the other

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because they feel and

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experienced it.

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of

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, it will give reminder when children will

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make

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the same mistake again and again.

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, they will stop to do it and improved their

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.

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, they

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know their mistakes when they suffered from the

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.

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, nowadays, tiny children do not behave better with the society members

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sometimes their language of talking is not good. So, parents are introducing the several types of physical

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over them and it improved children's

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to their respective persons.

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, it is a necessary to punish the children for their

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. Indeed, in a certain case, not only the physical

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improves

the pupils'

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behaviour but

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behaviour, but

giving a reward

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tackle

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situation. On the contradictory side, there are many effects of rewards, play a vital role for the good

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of children.

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of all, rewards give a motivation and enthusiasm to the children, by which they can try to improve their

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sometimes it provides an unexpected

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their performance too.

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, parents and teachers gave a reward in form of medal to their pupils even though, they had achieved an average score in the examination. By which, they can build the confidence level and

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try to the work hard. In

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, they

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sometimes achieved

a distinction score in their final exam.

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, giving rewards is the effective way for improving the child's

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. In conclusion, it is quite fact that both the perspectives give a

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regarding the improvement of pupil's

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, I am inclined towards the former view because it will be a more beneficial to the parents for improving the

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of their child by applying a physical

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.