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In many countries, young people are finding it harder and harder to find permanent jobs. Why is this? What can be done to improve the situation?

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It's believed that it's getting more difficult to land a fixed
job
 nowadays, especially for the youth, and that with the passage of time it keeps inching closer and closer to the impossible.
However
, I think that
this
 situation is getting blown out of proportion.
First
, more than one factor has to be taken as a cause of
this
 dilemma, starting with the employment rate, the number of jobs available, the general condition of the economy and the retirement age. These factors differ by country and should be taken
in
Suggestion
into
 account as a cause for the decrease in the vacancy of
work
wanting in physical strength
weak
 spots
availability
Suggestion
available
 to all without regards to the factor of age.
Secondly
, people think that most of the employers and bosses will only hire the middle-aged applicants, as they are more likely to have worked and achieved more in their
work
-life than their younger counterparts.
This
 in turn leads to the younger generation being more prone to
scrutinization
 due to their working experience.
This
 can be fixed by the willingness of the
job
 seekers to
work
 more, no one can expect life to be easy, and if you want to live a good life you are likely to
work
tears
Suggestion
tearing
 and blood for it. To conclude with, I think that the new wave of
job
 hunters has a good number of exceptionally capable people, with a great magnitude of qualifications and
work
 under their names. And
that
Suggestion
that's
 the problem of getting a
job
 is more in the mind of the searcher than the country they live in.
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