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Many countries are spending a huge amount of money on supporting their competitor to take part in some worldwide sports competitions. Others argue that it would be better if these countries can spend the money on children to take part in sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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An often debated topic is whether countries should invest a substantial amount on international sports competition as
this
 allows a global recognition.
However
, some people believe financial assistance should be directed to youth sports to reduce
crime rate
Suggestion
the crime rate
 among teenagers. Both sides of these arguments will be
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
 before a reasoned conclusion. On the one hand, a nation that provides monetary support for its athlete in global events will be recognized all over the world.
For example
, US is widely known for its unbeatable record in women’s football
competition having
Accept comma addition
competition, having
 won the women’s World Cup two consecutive times and
this
 can only be traced by the immense support provided by the government.
This
 is evident that large expense on international event improves a country’s identity.
On the other hand
, many argue children should encouraged to get involved in sporting activities to reduce teenage crimes.
For instance
,
provision
Suggestion
the provision
 of adequate facilities, sporting equipments, instructors and various scholarship opportunities youngsters will be motivated and preoccupied with relevant activities resulting in less chance of committing a crime.
This
 is clear that financially investing on adolescent with the purpose of getting them involved in sports reduces unprofitable activities among them.
Although
, the above look reveals
solids
Suggestion
solid
 evidence of both views, it is felt that the advantages diverting a large expense on worldwide events outweighs youth sports. It is hoped that on the challenge to provide enough help to the athletes in the foreseeable future.
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