Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that libraries should be substituted by computers for these are waste of materials and money, while there are others who think that these are still important and relevant. In my opinion, I believe that having libraries always available to the public these would serve as a tool and avenue to continue to learn while computers are an addition to the resources to educate people.
On the one hand, there are other people believed that libraries should not be shut down and not to be replaced by computers for these are
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