Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays children are too addicted

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to

gadgets like computers and electronic entertainment,

therefore

, playing

outdoors sports

Accept comma addition

outdoors, sports

and being involved in more traditional pastimes are better than engaging these indoor games all the time. In my opinion, I believe that it is more beneficial for children to expose to different kind of outside sports and

this

would have an impact to their interpersonal social skills as well.

Firstly

, young people who are always playing sports outside are definite that these physical activities

makes

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make

them strong and healthy. A good example to illustrate

this

idea is that when children play the games like football, basketball or cricket these would

entails

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entail

too much of energy and make their muscles are

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in

a training mode.

Furthermore

, being sports minded

this

would motivate you to being active and always be fit.

Secondly

, for the kids who are taking part in more traditional pastimes are the one who has developed camaraderie, interpersonal relationships etc.

This

would train them in learning the art of teamwork, develop skills vital for competitions and nourish their leadership qualities.

Moreover

, these skills will be a good foundation for the children that undoubtedly it would apply later in their career life.

Finally

, being active that starts in a young age

is

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are

more beneficial to their health like control the weight, reduce symptoms of anxiety and depression, and reduce the risk of developing health conditions

such

as heart disease, cancer etc. In conclusion, children should always motivate to engage outdoors activities and introduce them the traditional sports that would make them more interest and able to learn the benefits that would

last

for their lifetime if they keep on playing sports.