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Many people believe that reducing speed limits is the best option for road safety improvement .do you think there are other measures that could be put in place? what are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Safety
 on
streets
Suggestion
the streets
 has been one of the major concerns of many nations. There are so many rules and regulations implemented by authorities for
safety
, among which, as per majority, reducing speed limits is the best option.
This
 essay discusses some other measures which are
also
 important for a safe journey by
road
,
also
 illustrates some pros and cons of them. Over speeding contributes more to the main reasons of
road
 accidents. Even though, countries have established strict speed limit rules on their roads, it is not being followed effectively. So
instead
 of just imposing
such
 rules on citizens, it is the duty of every governments to check and verify these rules are followed by each and every one on
road
Suggestion
the road
roads
, through various methods like efficient speed monitoring radars, periodic police inspections, installation of speed breakers etc., and punish or charge some penalties to all those who are caught by violating
such
 laws. Apart from that, governments should
also
built
Suggestion
build
 good and wide
road
 system, along with other
safety
 facilities like, better traffic signal system, clear
road
 directions, and enough parking facilities for the vehicles.
Road
 usage restrictions by
authorities
Suggestion
the authorities
 has its own advantages and disadvantages. Traffic rules always help citizen to have a safe journey and peace of mind while on
road
Suggestion
the road
.
However
, some people have a notion that these rules are imposed strictly on them, which hurts their freedom.
Consequently
, people become reluctant to follow
such
 rules. It is the responsibility of government to eclipse these disadvantages with education about the necessity of
such
road
safety
 precautions. In conclusion, even though regulating low speed limits is one of the best practice to ensure
road
safety
, it should be backed with better traffic management by
authorities
Suggestion
the authorities
 and good awareness among the people who drive through roads.
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