Many people believe that the current system of both teachers and students in the classroom will no longer exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
The current
education
system
consists students, a teacher
and a classroom. Many believe, that this
system
may not exist in future
. The current idea of a Suggestion
the future
teacher
giving lectures to many student
in a classroom may become obsolete. Suggestion
students
First
of all we must understand the current education
system
we are talking about and why this
system
may face extinction. I do agree that we will see a lots
of changes in Suggestion
lot
education
Suggestion
the education system
system
in near future
. However
, I do not think that the entire system
will be replaced by a new one.
By the year 2050, there will be lots of inclusion
in the field of technology. Due to these new inventions, our life will be easier. Technological advancement will Suggestion
inclusions
also
affect our education
system
. We may see digital classrooms in future
, where Suggestion
the future
physical presence
of a Suggestion
the physical presence
teacher
is no longer required. Instead
of attending a lecture in a classroom, students can also
study from home in front of their computers. In my opinion, future
Suggestion
the future education system
education
system
will not be location dependent. Nonetheless
, the key members like students and teacher
will be there.
In conclusion, I think there will be a lots
of changes in Suggestion
lot
education
Suggestion
the education system
system
by the year 2050. I think those changes will bring a lot of positive aspects in the field of education
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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