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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

#room #college #student #arrangement #work #accommodation #officer #situation #addresses
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Nisha and I am part of the Executive MBA program of
University
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 of Toronto. I am writing
this
 letter to you with reference to the
accomodation
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accommodation
 that I have been currently allotted. I am sharing my room with the First year student of
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 course, who is attending evening classes. Our conflicting schedule is the core of my problem. Though for no fault of hers, there is a constant commotion in the room , once she is back from her classes in the night.
Thus
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 is very disturbing to my rest hours. I am an early riser and like to go to bed pretty early
in
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 night, but mostly in vain. To add to the gravity of
situation
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, I am suffering from acute migraine, and the disturbing sleep pattern has now started to have
severe
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 impact on my health. I sincerely request you to consider my request and grant me permission to shift to an independent room. I was just informed that there are
couple
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 of empty smaller rooms just available in the building. I would request you to consider my case and grant me permission to shift to one of
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those. Yours sincerely, Nisha

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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