You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Nisha and I am part of the Executive MBA program of

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of Toronto. I am writing

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letter to you with reference to the

accomodation

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accommodation

that I have been currently allotted. I am sharing my room with the First year student of

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course, who is attending evening classes. Our conflicting schedule is the core of my problem. Though for no fault of hers, there is a constant commotion in the room , once she is back from her classes in the night.

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is very disturbing to my rest hours. I am an early riser and like to go to bed pretty early

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night, but mostly in vain. To add to the gravity of

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, I am suffering from acute migraine, and the disturbing sleep pattern has now started to have

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impact on my health. I sincerely request you to consider my request and grant me permission to shift to an independent room. I was just informed that there are

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of empty smaller rooms just available in the building. I would request you to consider my case and grant me permission to shift to one of

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those. Yours sincerely, Nisha