Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while others argue that aid money is misspent by the governments that receive it and therefore international aid should not be given to poor countries. Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion.

The earth, we are living in, has become a global village. So, in

this

global village, countries have to depend on each other. There are poor and rich countries that depend on each others in some way or

others

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

. It is a situation,

that is

causing, people

to think

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think

that if rich governments or countries should come up to help poor

countries especially

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countries, especially

when the

aid

money, provided to poor countries, is being misspent.

However

, it is a difficult question to

answer but

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answer, but

anyway let's

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anyway, let's

check it

further

in our essay. The

first

and foremost thing that must be considered is corrupt governments of poor countries. If we see around the globe, we shall come up with the fact that there are enough poor-

countries

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countries'

governments bearing

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governments, bearing

the allegations of corruption or facing legal charges against them. There are many prominent examples that prompt in our minds if we think about the matter

such

as ex-Pakistani governments or Venezuela.

Further

, another crucial aspect of consideration may be of mismanagement. Different departments working in poor countries either under government or independently are not well-trained to keep up the

aid

money. These departments would be lacking in figures and facts about

field

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the field

fields

a field

.

Resultingly

, there were not well ready to use

aid

efficiently.

However

, even being many shortcomings, still,

this

aid

causes

move swiftly through or over

courses

to help many poor countries to develop projects.

Thus

, these poor countries could develop their own resources.

Further

, it is a proved fact that when poor countries will be able adequate to feed their nations, it will surely bring positive effect on

developed

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developing

countries as well.

For example

, it may cause a decline in the refugee stream

that is

being caused to hurt Europe or rich countries. So, the conclusion or sum up of the whole essay is that rich countries should keep helping poor countries, not just for poor countries but for their own sake as well.