Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is a notion that ideally, young people who are in
relationship
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a relationship
should live together
first
before legally
binded
confined by bonds
bound
bonded
, so that they have a chance to know their
partner
. I am not a proponent of
this
idea, since it does not guarantee of learning all about
person's attributes
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the person's attributes
and because of some legal consideration. Living together without legal commitment could not assure of knowing everything about their
partner
, because everybody
change
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changes
in every
aspects
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aspect
over time. Some people tend to be nice in
past few years
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the past few years
of a
relationship but
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relationship, but
later become
abhorent
offensive to the mind
abhorrent
adherent
, as they experience some detrimental effects of a
relationship
. Giving up a
realtionship
a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationship
relationships
and finding new one is not an answer, because everyone has flaws, and they do not need to be replaced but only to be accepted. There are
people despite
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people, despite
of their infuriating attitude toward their partners, still maintain a healthy
realtionship
a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationship
,
therefore
living together before getting married could not promise a healthy and
lenghtly
relationship
. In every
relationships
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relationship
, there is a risk that one might cheat their
partner
and become
adultorous
a person responsible for the editorial aspects of publication; the person who determines the final content of a text (especially of a newspaper or magazine)
editors
. In
this
event, a person who got cheated would not be able to file a legal complaint, because they are not legally married.
This
would only turn
premarital
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a premarital relationship
relationship
as a disadvantage for those people who was cheated by their
promiscous
not selective of a single class or person
promiscuous
other half, because there will be no legal case that might console their pain and suffering. Single mother
for instance
, who have been in a
pre marital
relating to events before a marriage
premarital
relationships
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relationship
, where several of them were
desserted
forsaken by owner or inhabitants
deserted
by their unsatisfied
partner
, and most
them
people in general
they
were not be able to file legal complaint, because of
lack
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the lack
of marriage certificate. In conclusion, entering into a
relationship
without legal commitment would not provide assurance of revealing one's intention due to unpredictable instances and due to some possible legal issues.
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