Topic 21: It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

Nowadays, some people claim that it is better for children to grow up in the

countryside

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than in a big

city

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. While

i

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I

agree that living in the

countryside

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brings many good things of our

children

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child

child's

children's

development

,

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,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that living in the big

city

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is equally useful. On the one hand,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

agree that it is better for children grow up in the

countryside

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.

Firstly

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, children need good

healthy

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health

, they require fresh air and not polluted by the huge amount of cars and factories in the modern

city

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.

Secondly

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, in the country where the children can spend more time communicating with their friends and

neighbor

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

instead

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of watching television, playing games and so on. That helps them to improve community life.

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, the children should live in a healthy environment, fewer crimes and a gang of narcotic addicts a lieu of a place that there are many dangers of crime and deprived culture like big cities to protect them from dangers, negative influence and improve their human dignity.

On the other hand

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, the children live in a big

city

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is very useful because there are many

convenience

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conveniences

for studying, working, entertainment and so on. When the children live there, they can a high standard of education, there are many chances to explore everything from practice trips so they can have wide knowledge.

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, a big

city

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usually has many entertaining

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

with movie theatres and play stations, the children can relax after hard lessons. That makes make them have a good health and grow well.

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, living in a big

city

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has facilities for health when they are ill because there are a lot of hospitals that we can take them to here quickly than in the

countryside

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. In conclusion, in my perspective, the children should live in a big

city

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because of benefits that can

helps

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help

them grow up better than living in the

countryside

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- a place has some restriction on learning, entertainment, medical stations and so on.