Everyone should start eating vegetarian because it helps improve health. To what extent do you agree?

A long term solution
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irresponsibly
. Children at schools could be taught about how to consume energy and recycle, so that
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the next generation
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, school children in Germany were taught about the consequences of treating the planet in a reckless manner and how they have one of the highest rates of recycling and renewable energy in the world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chronic diseases
  • nutrition
  • plant-based foods
  • gut flora
  • fiber content
  • saturated fats
  • mental health
  • nutritional deficiencies
  • vitamin B12
  • iron
  • omega-3 fatty acids
  • dietary restrictions
  • vegetarian diet
  • whole grains
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