The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken legally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning one language in the world?

Many believe that as the field of tourism expands, English will become the universal
language
being spoken across the world. There are many advantages and disadvantages to be considered of having a prominent
language
that dominates the whole planet. One of the benefits of having a globally spoken
language
is to have easier communication for everyone.
For example
, tourists will be able to travel to other countries and communicate with the locals without the need for a dictionary or translator.
In addition
, they can easily travel to their desired locations by asking directions in English and not fear of
miscommunication
. Having a universal
language
will
also
promote equality due to the fact that everyone would be using the same
language
and there will be no discrimination between people who speaks in a different
language
. There are
also
disadvantages to having English as the only
language
in the world.
Language
is considered as a type of culture that a country has in which makes the nation unique. The loss of a country’s dialect or their unique
first
language
will lead to a
shrink
Suggestion
shrinking
in
diversity
Suggestion
diversifying
.
Furthermore
, the loss of many dialects and languages will severely lessen job availabilities.
For instance
, translators will be forced to lose their jobs because translations will not be necessary anymore.
Although
having one
language
in the world can provide convenience to the public and
also
promote equality between different nations, the universal
language
will decrease the diversity and unique culture that a country has and
also
reduces the available occupations for people.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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