Globalization has brought about more positive economic impacts than negative ones. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Globalization, has

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major impact on the economic of the country, rather than the negative ones. I agree, with the statement, because of various factors, which I am going to discuss in the latter part of the story.

Comming

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Coming

to the positive side.

Firstly

, It provides an employment for the people either direct or indirect way.

For example

, due to

establishment

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the establishment

of the international companies, not only provides the jobs for the one who works in that, but

also

helpful for others through

restaurant's

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the restaurant's

, transportation and so on.

Secondly

, It increases the revenue for the nation and eliminates poverty.

For instance

, The government, will get income from the working sector through taxes and people living standards will be increased, which eliminates poverty.

Lastly

, will be the part of development of skilled resources. For a sample,

public

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the public

will tend to learn the technology,

that is

going to use in the particular one, which increase the skill of the resource. Regarding the other side of the coin, problems are many and few of them are as follows.

Initially

, the factories, may cause pollution and have an impact on the environment.

As a result

of automobile industry, the waste generated will cause

the damage to air

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damage to the air

and water.

Hence

, the

rulling

the reason for a court's judgment (as opposed to the decision itself)

ruling

party, need to have an eye for continuous monitoring.

Furthermore

native culture existance

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the native culture's existence

native culture existence

native culture's existence

native culture assistance

native culture's existance

may be in danger. Just a case, due to

soruces

the place where something begins, where it springs into being

sources

from

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diversified

cultures

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culture

, original may have

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treat of its survival and even extinct. In conclusion, considering the above points, due to worldwide integration has more benefits, than the problems, which can be reduced, by implementation of strict policies.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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11Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

271 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Globalization has brought about more positive economic impacts than negative ones. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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