In many cities, young people prefer shopping as a form of leisure activity. Why do you think this happens? Is it a positive or negative development?
There are different ways in which we can use our free
time
, such
as excercising
, hiking or reading a book. Recently, more and more young people living in big cities are enjoying the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercising
to spend
their free Suggestion
spending
time
shopping in shopping centers
. an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
Although
I do think people should spend their free time
as they see fit, I do not think it is a positivie
development characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
to
our society.
In my opinion, the main reason why people prefer shopping Suggestion
for
in
of
nowdays
is because the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
recieving
a present, regardless of who bought it, makes us feel special and unique. When we buy a new present, get something; come into possession of
receiving
whthere
it is a shirt or a hat, people feel that today is a special day, and that increase the sense of happiness and enjoyment. To Illustrate introduces two alternatives
whether
this
, a new research done in
Harvard University performed Suggestion
at
brain MRI
on people after buying a new pair of shoes. The research showed that the same areas which are in charge of happiness and excitement where active after Suggestion
a brain MRI
recieving
the present, explaining why people spend more and more free get something; come into possession of
receiving
time
shopping.
Unfortunately, I do not think spending time
shopping is a good way to spend the limited free time
most people have, and I believe it is a negative developmet
for our act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
sociaty
. Free an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
time
should focus on doing something different from our daily activites
, and broaden our lives. When a person any specific behavior
activities
is spending
most of his day in the big city, surrounded by buildings, I believe he should change his environment and go hiking, Suggestion
spends
for example
. By doing so, he will learn to enjoy all part
of our country and taste different surroundings before going back to his daily Suggestion
parts
envoironment
.
In conclusion, Shopping is a form of leisure the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
to
many people as it Suggestion
for
cause
them to feel unique and Suggestion
causes
heppy
. Regardless, I enjoying or showing or marked by joy or pleasure
happy
truely
believe people should spend their free in accordance with truth or fact or reality
truly
time
by changing their surrounding and seing
other parts of the country.having vision, not blind
seeing
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