Write about the following topic. Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Are traditions prevent
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Are traditions preventing
Do traditions prevent
Are traditions prevented
Have traditions prevented
us from being developed? We all know that traditions are about customs and old activities
form
a giver or sender
from
the past, while the innovation is caring about the future. While many are convinced that we should leave traditions and customs behind our backs, I strongly agree that we should follow most of them. In
this
essay, I will
firstly
explain what is the importance of them,
espacially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
, because they are not random things, and
secondly
, I will show how traditions can manage and affect our lives. Following traditions and customs may make our lives much easier, save our time and, in some cases, prevent a lot of pain.
This
is because many of them were built based on the elderly's experience.
This
means that they have a reason to be followed, and most likely they will shorten our roads and prevent us from doing the same wrong thing again and again or help us to follow and do the right thing from the
begining
the event consisting of the start of something
beginning
.
For example
, we have a custom in Jordan says that save some of your white day's
money
to the black one.
In other
words it
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words, it
asks us to not spend all of our
money
once we have it, alternatively, save some of it because we will need it some day. To be honest,
this
happend
come to pass
happened
with me, in the
past I
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past, I
had a very good amount of
money but
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money, but
I used to
spent
Suggestion
spend
it all, and now I am not working and out of
money
. If I had followed that say, my current
satuation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
would have been much better now. Following the good customs may make our progress performing much better. Traditions can play major roles in our lives
on
Suggestion
at
different levels,
such
as the social level. It can manage our relationships with others and show us the right way to treat with other people.
For instance
, there is a tradition in my country Jordan force the people from the same family to respect and follow the most wisdom and older man in the family. Which usually means that the family members would be much organized.
In addition
,
customs teach
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customs, teach
us how we should behave or what we should do in
specific situation
Suggestion
specific situations
a specific situation
,
such
as when a murder
crim
(criminal law) an act punishable by law; usually considered an evil act
crime
occures
come to pass
occurs
. It
force
Suggestion
forces
has forced
all the family members of the murderer to move from the area where the
crim
(criminal law) an act punishable by law; usually considered an evil act
crime
crimes
cream
committed.
As a result
, many of people's lives will be saved. Clearly, traditions can have an
advantagous
giving an advantage
advantageous
effect on the society if the right ones of them are followed. To conclude, Personally, I am convinced that following good customs may help us to innovate much faster and easier than not following them.
Moreover
, traditions can manage ourselves and our society in a remarkable way.
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