Some people think women should be given equal chance to work and excel in their careers. Other believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

In recent times women’s right has sparked great debates about whether women should have

identical chance

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the identical chance

an identical chance

to choose their occupations or they should do housework and take care of their children. I do believe that they should be given an equal right to men so that they can decide about their own jobs. On one hand, several

people especially

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people, especially

men feel that it is better for women to stay at their house and keep doing housework as well as raising their children. A strong reason for

this

is that majority of women naturally born to be weaker than men;

thus

, doing

works

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work

at their home is much safer.

In addition

, it is well known that the females are better at doing these tasks.

For example

, a

latest

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later

study found that women can raise their children more proper than men.

However

, I disagree with

this

view as there are some women who have abilities to do jobs outside their house.

On the other hand

, some people think that women should be the ones who make their decision about

this

.

This

is because they feel that women do some tasks which required focus and patient much better than men.

For instance

, A research concluded that employers prefer female workers than male workers in accounting, teaching young people, and advertising.

Consequently

, I really believe that we should let each woman to decide her job based on her skills whether she wants to stay at their home and to take care of their housework and children or not. In conclusion, even if somebody

think

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thinks

that women suit with doing

unharmful

tasks

at

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in

their house. I feel that some jobs are more suitable for them than men.

Therefore

, they must be given an equal right to decide their own careers.