The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.

The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.
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The column chart depicts the
number
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of male and female
students
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studying
computer
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science
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at a
UK
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university within three years from 2010 to 2012. It
also
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shows whether they are family
students
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or international
students
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. In terms of men, about 40 British
students
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studied
computer
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science
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in 2010, and 20 international
students
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did so. By 2012, the difference in the
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of
students
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between the two countries has become smaller and smaller; about 44 British male
students
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and nearly 40 international male
students
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have taken
computer
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science
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courses,
although
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in 2011 25 nationality
students
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enrolled in
computer
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science
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courses. Compared with men, the
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of female
students
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in
computer
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science
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courses in the
UK
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is much higher than that of international
students
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in 2010 (14). The
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of female
students
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in the
UK
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has increased dramatically. Nearly 45
students
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in 2011 and 2012, the
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of international female
students
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has steadily increased, reaching 20
students
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by 2012.
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, the
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of female
students
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in the
UK
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is rising compared to male
students
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in the
UK
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. At the same time, the
number
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of international male
students
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is higher than the
number
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of overseas female
students
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, computer, science, uk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • number
  • students
  • Computer Science
  • UK university
  • increased consistently
  • significant rise
  • recorded
  • enrolled
  • attributed to
  • growing demand
  • professionals
  • job market
  • popularity
  • technology-related fields
  • inferred
  • subject
  • gaining prominence
  • steady growth
  • positive trend
  • field
  • portrays
  • importance
  • technological advancements
  • society
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