The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.
The column chart depicts the
number
of male and female students
studying computer
science
at a UK
university within three years from 2010 to 2012. It also
shows whether they are family students
or international students
.
In terms of men, about 40 British students
studied computer
science
in 2010, and 20 international students
did so. By 2012, the difference in the number
of students
between the two countries has become smaller and smaller; about 44 British male students
and nearly 40 international male students
have taken computer
science
courses, although
in 2011 25 nationality students
enrolled in computer
science
courses.
Compared with men, the number
of female students
in computer
science
courses in the UK
is much higher than that of international students
in 2010 (14). The number
of female students
in the UK
has increased dramatically. Nearly 45 students
in 2011 and 2012, the number
of international female students
has steadily increased, reaching 20 students
by 2012.
Overall
, the number
of female students
in the UK
is rising compared to male students
in the UK
. At the same time, the number
of international male students
is higher than the number
of overseas female students
.Submitted by jjjjk on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, computer, science, uk with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!