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Nowadays parents are sending their children to trips abroad for educational purposes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#parents #children #trips #purposes
In abroad, the education system is more advanced, there are many things to learn for the student so in present parents are
allow
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allowed
allowing
to
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for
 their children to travel to foreign for educational purposes. But in which advantages
are weigh
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are weighing
weigh
are weighed
 over the disadvantages. It will
further
explained
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explain
 in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
.
To begin
, there are some advantages of education
trip
.
First
 is students are gaining the enough information about
study
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a study
the study
 like which kind of study is given by teachers to their students in other countries. After
this
plural of "this"
these
 students
also
 check their study level to compare with
forieger
 students.
However
, they learn what kind of
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
 and teaching style are there.
Moreover they
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Moreover, they
 gain practical knowledge which
are given
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is given
 in abroad because the technology is very advanced and institutes they used high tech machines or equipments.
even
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Even
 though
student
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the student
a student
students
 can compare the way of teaching which are given in their country.
On the other hand
, there are less disadvantages of educational
trip
 are some children they left
thir
of them or themselves
their
there
third
trip
 and ran away ad did not come back to their home and they lived in abroad
illegly
in an illegal manner
illegally
 or one or two both
them
people in general
they
 are
go
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going
gone
 to their relatives without
permissoin
approval to do something
permission
 and that type of problem are faced by the management. It concluded that, the
trip
 of education purposes
are
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is
 good for those
student
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students
 who are interested to gain extra knowledge.
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