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I received a bachelor’s degree in robotics and automation engineering with
first
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class
honor
a university degree with honors
honours
from King Mongkut’s University of Technology Thonburi. After graduation, I
always desire
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have always desired
to pursue master’s and doctoral degrees oversea in a field related to robotics. My goal is to design a novel, world-class human-level
intelligence
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or animals-like abilities for
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robot
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the robot
robots
. I am proud to present that I am one of the best in my class since I have gained not only academic
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but
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practical experience. I was elected to receive best bachelor’s thesis award.
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, me and my teammates completed two difficult semester
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. Only certain people can finish them;
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, our robots received the best performance. The curriculum is extremely intense because it was designed and taught by many lecturers who graduated from top-ranked universities. Combining several courses together as a module,
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program concentrates on
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the integration
of
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from different courses.
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, several
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(
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intelligence
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intelligent
, adaptable
robot
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and optimal
control
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). For four years, I have done numerous projects and
research
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extended from these topics. While I was working on optical character and image recognition, I was aware that deep learning model
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as
convolutional
following accepted customs and proprieties
conventional
convolution
neural network requires a large pool of training samples, which is very hard to get. I would like to make data acquisition get easier by using synthetic images
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and transfer the trained model to capture images;
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,
performance
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the performance
of the model dropped significantly. To deal with
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problem, edge detection and
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, inspired by the ways we recognize characters, were employed. I
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published
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work at
International Computer Science
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the International Computer Science
and Engineering Conference under the supervision of Dr.
Warasinee
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Worsen
Chaisangmongkon. After I gained sufficient
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on
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of
deep
leaning
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
, I was challenged by an application of discrete-time neural network in
locomotion
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control
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during my internship with Prof. Poramate Manoonpong. I performed a
study
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on
adaptable
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adaptive
locomotion
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of a gecko
robot
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with
modular neural mechanism
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a modular neural mechanism
implemented in
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robot operating system
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a robot operating system
the robot operating system
. Serving as
central pattern generator
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a central pattern generator
central pattern generators
and neural
postprocessing
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post processing
, it
generate
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generates
rhythmic motor signals that used to
control
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the
robot
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. The
robot
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received a feedback from
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attached to its body and
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smoothly altered its gait according to slope of climbing surface. In my bachelor’s thesis, I worked with Dr.
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teerakittikul
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. He introduced me an amazing computation inspired by
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the characteristic
of
hormone
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called artificial
hormone
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mechanism. The concentration rises after receiving stimulus, and slowly falls when there is no stimulation. There is an equilibrium state called homeostasis when decay rate is nearly equal to
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production rate. Different scales of
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the stimulation lead
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adaptation. The main advantages of
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are
to handle with noise or other stimulating signals that do not converge to zero after adaptation. I focused on designing an artificial
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mechanism for a gecko
robot
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to climb on uneven surface. Several
step
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steps
were taken to
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achieve
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, modular neural
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was employed for gait generation.
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, the
robot
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stretched its leg corresponding to level of artificial
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stimulated by foot contact signal.
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, there was another higher level
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acted as if it controls confidence of the
robot
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. If the gecko
robot
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is likely to fall, its confidence drops; as a consequence, the
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locomotion
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locomotive
was paused while its legs were adjusted. With
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bio-inspired strategy, the
robot
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was able to climb across
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the gap
a gap
and step without falling down. I do enjoy conducting
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because of
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a couple reasons
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is the way
i
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I
can start using my ability to expand
boundary
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the boundary
boundaries
of human
knowledge
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.
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, participation in an international conference creates an excellent opportunity to explore other outstanding works which may be useful ideas for carrying out my
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. My ultimate goal is to become
principle investigator
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a principle investigator
of a
research
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team that benefits people around the world by contributing novel intelligent mechanisms and robots with human-level
intelligence
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. I want to provide
supports
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support
and work with various passionate international people. In order to reach my goal, I wish to
study
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and gain access to world-class resources in a great international institute especially in UiO. To build upon my current
knowledge
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and experience, I keen on studying more about robotics in a curriculum that focus on artificial
intelligent
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intelligence
and
robot
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control
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. After several months of searching for that, I found only a program named Robotics and Intelligent
Systemsat
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Systems at
UiOthat contains a great deal of interesting lectures (
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as biologically inspired computing, introduction to robotics,
control
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of manipulators and mobile robots, artificial
intelligence
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and machine learning). From my point of view, taking part in those classes can perfectly
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extend
my
knowledge
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in machine learning,
robot
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control
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and bio-inspired intelligent. Regarding my
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interests, I am open to
wide variety
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a wide variety
of
project
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projects
involving utilization of artificial
intelligent
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intelligence
in robotics. There are
several of exciting
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several exciting
projects at UiO. Conducting
research
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relating to either evolutionary robotics (morphology evolution
,
Accept space
,
evolution in
locomotion
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patterns and captivity and learning) at ROBIN
research
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group or
robot
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control
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using CPGs at RITMO, is a valuable opportunity to
study
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and design a new approach for controlling
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robot
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the robot
. As far as I am concerned, my solid academic background,
research
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experiences, and strong passion will be beneficial to complete Robotics and Intelligent
Systemsat
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Systems at
UiO, and
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to publish my work in good journals. To my mind,
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program is a great match for my expertise.
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, studying at UiOwill provided me a great opportunity to conduct my
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with excellent resources under
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the guidance
of prominent professors and will help me to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
my goal.
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