more and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

Today, most of the farmers are moving to urban areas from rural areas for work, Because of so many reasons. They may be weather is not supported for agriculture or for their children’s education.
However
, it is not a good sign
to
Suggestion
of
our society. Due to shifting of
agrarians
from villages to cities causes agrarian crisis after some days. Again, it will lead to the economic crisis of a nation.
This
is not good for prosperous
,
Accept space
,
healthy and wealthy world. And
also
, population will increase in towns.
Moreover
, employment is a very big issue. Providing jobs
to
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for
everyone is not possible. So, most of the families will not get food, even two times daily. Because of that, unemployed people will divert into wrong side to do wrong things for money. Due to that, the crime rate will increase in cities. So, the government has to take the actions to stop the ranchers to move from villages and
also
encourage them by providing bank loans without interest. In cultivation, if they’ll get the profit they’ll repay the amount.
Otherwise
, in any case, if they lost their yield, the regime has to cancel the amount how much they were taken for agribusiness irrespective of amount. By giving original seeds to get a good crop and pesticides to control the insects to the farmers, they will get good results in farming. And the administration has to provide free education and accommodation facilities to their children. In conclusion, in my point of view, entire nation depends on farming. So, we have to protect our noblemen by providing good facilities
to
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for
them and their families.
This
is not only managerial work.
This
is the responsibility of all public those who are living in a nation.
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