In some countries, the government prioritises economic growth above other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion

The authorities in some countries rank economic improvement over other issues. I support
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view because the benefits of
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policy offset the demerits as it will improve the employment status and the standard of living. One commonly cited disadvantage of the government prioritising
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in the
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of a nation over other issues is the negative impact on the
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of the citizens. A major reason for
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is that many employers would put more emphasis on
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rather than the wellbeing of their employees.
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, they could extend the duration of
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, limit holidays and promote working overtime so as to increase profits.
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has deleterious
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consequences.
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, in recent years, some workers in Japan choose to
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overtime or without a break.
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,
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causes significant
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in the
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, some of
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people develop
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problems like depression, anxiety disorder and cardiovascular disease.
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reveals the negative impact of
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a policy. Despite
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, there are two important advantages of increased emphasis on economic
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.
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of all, it increases the job opportunities in many countries. People are often encouraged to start a business which would contribute
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to the nation's
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, coupled with the rise in capital flight into the country from foreign investors. As a consequence, there are more job offers in new companies and in other expanded industries.
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, the standard of living of people in
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countries improves.
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is owing to the fact that improvements in a nation's
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would result in
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developments
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as better accommodations, good public transportation systems, improved
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care and more social amenities.
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, people would be more satisfied with the
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and their living conditions. In conclusion,
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when government prioritises economic
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over other concerns,
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could create more
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challenges.
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, I believe that the benefits of improved employment and the standards of living is more important.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic growth
  • quality of life
  • standard of living
  • infrastructure development
  • employment opportunities
  • environmental impact
  • wealth disparity
  • modernization
  • sustainable development
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • industrialization
  • ecological footprint
  • capital investment
  • urbanization
  • economic prosperity
  • fiscal policy
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