Many doctors say that people in today's world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?

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Now a

days

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day

contemporary world

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the contemporary world

, it is imperative to do physical exercises as a part of

healthy life style

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a healthy lifestyle

healthy lifestyle

. In today's

world many

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world, many

medical practitioners objecting the people as they were not performing physical exercises.

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essay will discuss some causes and suggest the main solutions to overcome

this

causes.

Firstly

, Daily

exercise

is a part of every

mankind particularly

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mankind, particularly

ignoring the physical

exercise

can lead to severe stress sometimes it can make you lower down the confidence levels of

person

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a person

the person

people

Moreover

ignoring physical activity will increase health risks in many ways while the main reason are mankind in

this

modern era was busy with their

workstlye

ignoring the physical activities in daily life. Some

peole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

behaves

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behave

lazy even when they have time for

exercise

while some people busy with their work life complaining that there was no time for physical

activites

any specific behavior

activities

which leads to problems like

overwheight

usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it

overweight

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flabby body.

For instance

the employee who was ignoring the daily

exercise

due to

workpressure

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work pressure

will have

grevous

causing fear or anxiety by threatening great harm

grievous

stress on him

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although

these are preventable measures.

contrast there

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contrast, there

are some solutions to overcome

this

causes

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especially keeping the physical

exercise

as part of

daily routine

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the daily routine

. Meanwhile doing cardio

exercise

is best option for every mankind as it is easy for

everone

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ever one

every one

with some space

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with

balcony and with no equipment so

this

will

rise

raise the level or amount of something

raise

confidence level and keep the body fit,

For

instance persons

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instance, persons

who are

kepping

conformity or harmony

keeping

coping

physical activity as their routine will have high confidence levels and fit body for

this

reason

its

it is

it's

better to perform some cardio activities for being fit. In conclusion, medical

pratictioners

someone who practices a learned profession

practitioners

warning people for not performing enough physical activities.

This

essay discussed some causes as well as solutions to overcome

this

causes

Thu Aug 01 2019

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