Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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One of the biggest social and practical
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take exception to
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that people living abroad face is the
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barrier.
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In fact
, every country has its own
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.So, it is difficult for the person who moves to any
foriegn
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
country, because, he has to speak the foreign
language
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.While
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do admit it can be quite
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the first few weeks
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a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
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barrier
fairely
to a moderately sufficient extent or degree
fairly
freely
quickely
with rapid movements
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. There is
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no doubt that any
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is the
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issue for immigrants when they shifted to other countries.
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Initially most
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Initially, most
of the people getting problem while talking to someone, they feel conserved
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as well
because they are not that much expert in the
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a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
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languages
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. Not being able to speak the native
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may affect their ability to socialise and make friends.
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, they have to cope up with many problems during carrier findings and job interviews.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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