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Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both this views and give your opinion.

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Number of people assume that the optimal present for adolescents is currency, while others are against it. In
this
 essay, I will consider both
side
Suggestion
sides
 of the argument and
then
 I will give my own opinion on the matter. Supporters of giving
money
 as a
gift
 to the young persons, probably suppose that it is the best way to teach children to manage their own budget. Having their own
money
 the youth will learn
how make right decisions
Suggestion
how to make the right decisions
how make the right decisions
 in terms of finances and the optimal usage of them.
For instance
, my parents used to give cash to me in my childhood and I have learned how to deal with mu budget.
In addition
, youngsters may have some dream, which they would not tell anyone and if they receive
money
 as a
gift
, children will pursue it.
However
, opponents may argue that giving
money
, as a present to adolescents is a mistake because they may devalue them without realizing how difficult to earn them.
Besides
, teenagers may start using cash for buying alcohol and cigarettes. Especially, if bad company is involved, the cash may serve to wrong purpose.
Thus
, the best
gift
 for teens will be something they dreamed of, while the
money
 should be given as encouragement for good
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. In conclusion, I think both sides have their merits. On balance,
however
, I believe that
money
 should not be given as a
gift
. The best way, to give
money
 on
daily basis
Suggestion
a daily basis
 depending on
child’s behavior
Suggestion
the child’s behaviour
child’s behaviour
a child’s behaviour
.
Thus
, children will value
money
 and learn to manage their budget.

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