At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

It is well known that some countries have a

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with more young people than old people. Even

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fact could have both advantages and disadvantages, In my opinion the positive implications of having a youthful

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over-weigh the negative ones.

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essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages giving examples to support both

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of view. On one hand, having

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people could lead to a lack of professionals in the society. Older

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may be more educated than

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one,

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is being why they have had more time to study a professional career during their lives.

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, to become a specialist physician it is needed at least 10 years of university studies and

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may not be able for a young adult yet.

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, younger

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less life experience than

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. People after their 50’s may have been through a lot in life and they may be more prepared to solve any day-life problem than younger people.

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could help to form a less stressful society.

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, younger populations

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likely to have

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higher rates

a higher rate

of crime,

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could be because young people have more energy to commit crime than old people. A study from the University of Chile showed that in the south of Chile, where the

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is mostly young, the rate of robs and crimes where twice higher than in the north where most of the

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in their 50’s and older.

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, youthful populations are in general more active and

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may be because they have less old age-associated illness leading them to work more and maintain them-self more active. Adding to the fact that healthy people can work more efficiently, with

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they can contribute to the economy of the country, making money

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of spending.

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, it is a fact that old societies spend a lot of money in health for their

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citizens. Another positive aspect of having young adult populations is that there are more chances of having outstanding sport professionals. Young people have more time and more energy than

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people to practice and become an excellent

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professional. In soccer most of the

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retires from their soccer-career when they turn thirty years old. With old people there would be no time to start a sport career. And

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but not least, young societies are more likely to have outdoor activities for the community.

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could be because they are more proactive in

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more likely to participate in them.

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people may be too tired to go out. To conclude with the arguments given above, I firmly believe that the advantages of

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the youthful population

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over-weigh the disadvantages. Even though, there are some positive aspects of having an older

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we should consider.