Some people think that government is wasting money on arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere? Do you agree or disagree?

The specified topic is very pertinent as the same is being discussed in multiple global forums. Some mortals think that
government
is merely waste
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merely wastes
money
in
arts whereas
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arts, whereas
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
think that expenses could be utilized
on
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in
some important facilities for folks.
To begin
with
,
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,
construction of
new wonderful structure
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the new wonderful structure
and
beauly
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Beauly
beauty
city don't make a city
developed but
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developed, but
the education level of the mortals
make
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makes
it well developed and beautiful
.
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.
There are many reasons behind it
.
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.
Government
should invest
money
to improve education system as well as provide free education facilities for poor people.
Moreover
,
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,
they should
spend expenditure
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spend, expenditure
to maintain roads and improve public transportation. Apart from
this
,
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,
government
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the government
should expend funds on cleanliness and security in cities for people.
Furthermore
,
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,
government
should used
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should use
money
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the money
to provide important facilities like electricity
,
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,
water supply.
In addition
,
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,
they should invest to provide good health facilities as well as clean and healthy environment.
Government
should construct factories to provide jobs to youngsters.
Further
,
ultilize
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
utilize
utilizes
utilized
funds to give accommodation to
porr
deserving or inciting pity
poor
poorer
for
people who live in the slum areas. In conclusion,
government
should invest
money
to provide basic facilities
first
after that they should spend
money
on arts because it is
also
very important which is reducing
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
significance with the passage of time
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enriching society
  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
  • generate revenue
  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
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