Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In every democratic

coutry

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

, males and females should

recieve

get something; come into possession of

receive

equal rights in every aspect of life. Unfortunately, not in every

case

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case, this statement

this

statement holds true, and especially in academic

intitutes

set up or lay the groundwork for

institutes

, boys have been accepted to

school

much more than girls. In order to correct

this

bad tradition, some people

believe

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believes

that universities should

recieve

get something; come into possession of

receive

both sexes in

simialr

quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity

some

amount.

Although

I do believe females should be eligible

to

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for

the same positions as men, I do not fully agree with the above statement. By accepting

equal number

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an equal number

of males and females into the

university

, more females will be able to

persue

carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in

pursue

peruse

parse

am academic

position

and hold senior jobs in the future, which may

further

assist to improve their status in our society. Currently, because more are graduating from the universities, they are more likely to

recieve

get something; come into possession of

receive

high paid positions

im

to or toward the inside of

in

I'm

comparisson

the act of examining resemblances

comparison

to females. As a consequence, males are more commonly the primary earners in most families. If more girls will graduate from universities, their chances of earning more money will increase substantially and,

as a result

, so will their

position

in the society. Examples

to

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of

that can be seen in Israel, where a new law stated that 45% of all students will be females. As a

rsult

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

result

results

, females salary increased

in

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by

25% within a decade and 20% females hold senior positions in public companies.

In contrast

, I do not believe the amount of females and male should be controlled because, in my opinion, other factors

such

as intellect and high

school

diploma scores should be the sole parameters through which people enter the

university

. It is completely immoral for a

men

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man

not to get accepted,

although

he is fully qualified, just because a certain

position

is saved for the other sex.

This

has been shown clearly in a recent article published by Harvard

university

which showed that when applying fixed

position

based on gender,

school

performace

a dramatic or musical entertainment

performance

drop by 25%. To conclude, women deserve to have equal rights as men and

this

may be done through legislation. Regardless,

school

performace

a dramatic or musical entertainment

performance

performers

and individual ability should be

te

definite article

the

only parameters when applying to the

university

.