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Some people think that computer games are bad for children, while others believe that they are useful. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of computer games and give your own opinion.

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Some would argue that online games are not good for kids. While,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 consider that they can be beneficial.
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,
video
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 games are
benefits
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benefiting
 young people, but I believe that children adopt
these
denotes a person or thing
this
 kind of lazy lifestyle and ignore physical activities does deteriorate health. The main advantages
for
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of
 playing online games for young person, they can develop their
language
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 skills in an authenticate context.
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 may lead to
development
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the development
 of
second
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language
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 which can
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benefit
 in near future.
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, while playing online games a young child can chat
to
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with
 American or British team mates in games. It is a kind of
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language learning process
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the language learning process
 in an enjoyable way, games
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 as PUBG or WarCraft. Despite of, getting fluent in
language
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, I believe,
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 games
a
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an
 addictive and it is hard for kids to get into other activities and when it comes to exercising they ignore and adopt
lazy lifestyle
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a lazy lifestyle
.
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, there are disadvantages to playing computer games, generally kids get
addict
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addicted
 to these games and less involvement in physical activities. As these games are designed so well that on completion of each task participant wins points,
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 winning kicks on every stage in games releases dopamine in
brain
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the brain, thus
the brain thus
thus
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 a satisfaction for kids to get more
such
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 pleasure, eventually they get addicted to
such
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video
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 games and completely ignore exercising,
thus
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 gaining diseases
such
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 in diabetics and heart attacks in
future
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the future
.
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, recently a survey on addictive
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 games people conducted by Oxford university found that
life span
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the life span
 of these people
are
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is
 very short due to less physical activities and chances suffering
to
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of
with
 heart diseases is in these people. To conclude, though
video
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 games are helpful to learn languages.
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, I believe that physical activities do wonders in a person’s life fighting against diseases through willpower.
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